请大家帮我修改一下这篇英语短文春节的由来与习俗(英...

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第一段第一行最后一词“Benning”首字母小写即可

第一段第二行括号中“twenty-four”改为“twenty-forth”,表示第二十四个；coodination是什么意思?

第一段第三行最后一词“year”首字母应大写,最好再加上引号,因为前面有“the word”,第四行中的“year”最好也这么改

第一段第四行中“monster”和“beast”删去一个,因为它们都表示“兽”“怪物”,且都是名词（您是要用名词作定语吗?大可不必.其“monster”就是“怪兽”的意思）

第二段第二行第三句“came to their rescue”改为“came to rescue them”好吗?

第二段第三行“To Nian he said,I hear say that you are very capable”改为“He said to Nian,I've heard something about you,people thought that you are very capable”

第三段第三行“he had told people to put up red paper decorations ”改为“he had told people to put up red decorations”会更好一些.毕竟红色装饰品的范围比红纸要大,而且在古代普通百姓家用红色染物品比买弘治要便宜得多、普遍得多

最后一段第四行,“putting up red paper and firing fire-crackers ”改为“putting up red decorations and firing firecrackers”

《习俗》部分：

第二行“red papercuts.becouse”改为“red,because”,同样可以表示“……人们通常用红色装饰门窗……”；“People usually clean house too.becouse”改为“People usually clean house,too.Because”,“too”放句尾而不在前面加逗号是最忌讳的

第三行“Children can get some new clothes or presents from their parents and grandparents”改为“Children usually get some new clothes,presents and money from grown-ups”因为孩子们能够得到的不只是新衣服,还有一些礼物、红包.按照您原来的意思则有局限性,建议您将句意放开一些,范围更广一些

第四行“My family is going to pay New Year's visits to many relatives and friends during the Spring Festival”改为“My family usually visit other families during the Spring Festival”因为“is going to”容易让人误认为是“将会”,而后面又有“during”,意思不免有些混乱；前面“New Year's”与后面“during the Spring Festival”重复

由于本人能力有限,以上仅供您参考,进行自主检查与修改.如有错误,敬请您指出并海涵!

总之,这是一篇很成功的英语说明文（有些夹叙夹议的色彩）,希望您在以后的写作中注意一些特殊的书面要求与书面习惯.祝愿您在英语学习中取得更高的成绩!

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I am honored to TO BE HERE TODAY AND TO ADDRESS MY WORDS IN THIS FAREWELL PARTY on behalf of the volunteers who arrived IN GuangZhou and the (middle school students with their English)---I DON'T REALLY UNDERSTANT WHAT YOU TRY TO SAY HERE,DO YOU MEAN THE STUDENTS WHO KNOW HOW TO SPEAK ENGLISH?IF SO,YOU SHOULD SAY THE MIDDLE SCHOOL STUDENTS WITH THEIR FLUENT ENGLISH SKILLS.

FIRST OF ALL/ FIRSTLY,thanks ALL teachers and students WHO CARED ABOUT our LIVES,work and GAVE us some help during the PAST half month.(RIGHT NOW I WILL SAY THAT We have a deeper understanding of the Chinese students)这句话好像有点不知所云.We were LIVING in the native FAMILIES that know Chinese FAMILIES' value and DAILY HABITS.

Finally,we welcome everyone to TRAVEL OUR CITY as AN exchange student in the next July.

我觉得楼主你应该给我看看你要表达的中文意思,因为这样才可以给你修改这篇文章.最后一句实在别扭,你是要表达下一年的7月,我们还会欢迎所有交换生吗?

问题2：一篇英语游记的作文,请大家帮修改Last Monday,I went to Beijing Gaobeidian Wastewater Treatment Plant,as the biggest and most important wastewater treatment plant in Beijing ,is a major factory which for improving the environment to benef[英语科目]

我快~ ~ 是高中生吧?那我就稍微说下我的看法吧

Last Monday,I went to Beijing Gaobeidian Wastewater Treatment Plant,the biggest and most important wastewater

treatment plant in Beijing ,which dedicates in improving enviroment and benefit the society as well.

(原句is a major factory which for improving the environment to benefit the society.主句 与前面有两个谓语,重复,并且which 后面的从句中缺乏谓语,其实,我建议你这句话不要,因为前面已经说了the biggest /most important,这后面的话不就是多余的吗）

First of all, when I arrived the factory 差介词at,

I saw a film of treating with 介词有误,saw a film on treating whith.

I learn a lot of tings about water 动词时态有误,用过去时

using reuse water 修饰语 应为 reused water

saw many workers work in it.我认为应该为 saw many workers working in it.你看见这个动作时候,发生的

This experience makes me understand that the water is very important for us.Please not waste water ,for our environment

and for 2008 Olympic game.

时态,made me.

please do not ..

同学 ,加油~

问题3：请大家帮我把这篇英文改下,帮我修改这篇英语文章错误处.How I feel about my reflective skillsAfter period of learning,I found myself in the course of study still exist many deficiencies,these disadvantages that I cannot get bette[英语科目]

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有一次,我总觉得是技能能力良好,所以一直也没去提升自己,当我遇到更严重的比我人在这个时候,我发现,是我自己一直没有进展,我忽略了对个人的技能培训,也不是很认真的考虑过要怎么个人技能,这是导致一个原因我不能进步,现在我觉得自己也不会成为一个很不错的学生,虽然以前,我感觉很好,为自己,也因为我够努力,我遇见了对手,但是,我为自己的优点很了解,我是一个思想的人,只不过是非常积极的,所以没有因为懒惰总是严格要求自己.事实上,我对知识技能的掌握和理解事实或很快,因为我不会花时间去学习.所以我认为,因为我现在的能力是有限的,因为我自己够努力,没有明确的目标,我不是一个接受能力很差的学生,甚至,我接受能力良好,我认为,在以后的学习中,我应该知道,自己的目标是什么,是成为一名优秀勤勉的学生,我想我会读更多的要求等,多思考,许多方式来改变自己,完善自己.

为他们未来的变化,我有信心,我相信,克服了懒惰,但我可以让自己成为更出色的自己

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We usually use umbrella when it is raining.But do know you who invented them?Regarding the invention of umbrella,there are many folk legends,among which the most widely spread one is the story about Lu Ban inventing umbrella.As the folklore tells,umbrellas were invented by a Chinese woman in ancient time.She was Carpenter Lu Ban's wife.Ban usually worked outside and he was often spoilt by downpours.So his wife came up with an idea.She cut the bamboos into pieces and covered it with fur.It looked like a pavilion.That was how umbrella emerged in China.

1.天气在下雨不用the weather is rainy.一般直接说it is rainy/raining.

2.根据民间传说,不用lengend.这个词类似于玉皇大帝菩萨神仙那种传说……民间传说使用folklore.

3.被雨淋湿不用soaked,一般是用catch by the rain.

4.最后一句,form是形成的意思.我觉得这里用“形成”不是很恰当哦……所以我改成了“这就是雨伞在中国怎么出现的”.

此外我还增添了一点句子.仅作参考……

问题5：请帮忙改这篇英文作文帮我指出其中语法或者时态之类的错误,最好能有评价1.目前盗版的现象比较严重2.造成这种现象的原因及危害3.Say No to Pirated ProductsNowdays,the appearance of piracy in our society i[英语科目]

这篇文章总的来说还是不错,英语功底挺好的.只是内容和用词还可以写得更深刻,有一些语法错误.Pirated products depend on their cheap operating cost and easy making more and more appeal to the lowless people.这句话可以改成：Depending on their lower operating cost and easy making method,priated products are appealing to more and more people in the market.

So some of lowless people in order to seek the money,they produced the pirated products.句中的in order to 要放在句首：in order to seek money,some of the ...

This appearance threaten(加S） the intellctual property rights serious（用副词seriously).It breaks the law and copyrights infringement.

In my opinion,we should stop to buy the pirated products from(换个介词,by或for ) ourselves.If we see somebody who buying（用一般时态,这是一个从句,buys) or selling(用sells,如果这句话不用从句,去掉who,就可以用ing)the pirated products,we must try all means to stop them and tell them the harm of （加个doing要好些）this thing.

I think attack the piracy is our duty.这句话可以换一个表达方式：i think fighting against the priracy is our duty.用attack不太恰当,而且这里的动词要用ing.