错误122_求职信，帮我看看有没有语法错误，求职信(122)Dear Sir...[英语]

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写得挺好的,格式我觉得用全部左对齐就行.是不是有点太正式了,比如用到了rapport 这词儿,还有这么简单的信里,复杂的句型就不必了,not only ..but also,to begin with ,whatis more 太拖沓啦.第二三段建议改为：

In July,as bachelor of journalism,I will graduate from Peking University.Four years'theory study and society practice help me know how to communicate with people of all walks and ages.I believe I am qualified for this position.

Interview offer or any question from you,will be much appreciated.Please feel free to contact me at 010-xxxxxxx.

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of the January 5th 2010 改为 on January 5th 2010

but I also 改为 but also I

Should you grant me 改为If you ....

其它基本都可以啦，希望对你有所帮助！

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第一行：去掉“to”

第四行：去掉“the”或改成“summertime”(固定搭配)

第四行：“cooler”改成“cool”

第七行：“was”改成“is”

So many people go to there中删to

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i'm hard这句有点不知所云.另外,语气有点生硬,不大像求职.我给你修改了一下,供你参考.

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Sincerely yours

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第二句勉强可以

第一句你那个full是怎么出来的?原句里面怎么翻到这个词的啊?

第二句我觉得把try改成do最好 因为是do one's best

try one's best是中国式英语

第三句 want 后面接动词要加to

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你不用理那个第一句了 网上的翻译很恶心