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Hello everyone,it is my great pleasure to share my speech with you today .my speech is about my favorite singer.—wangleehom

I think everyone here likes music,do you have some favorite singers?Let me intruce my favorite singer to you.

Wangleehom is an American-Chinese; he was born in New York.He studied music at Williams College and the Berklee College of Music.he sings songs over 10 years till now and has lots of fans over the world.And I am a member of his fans club.

I began to like his songs when I was in high school .I remember that I lived in school without parents in the first time,so I felt lonely and homesick,then I began to listen some songs .when I heard leehom’s songs,suddenly my heart calmed down..After that,only if I felt unhappy,his music efficiently kept me comfort.

Then I find he is a guy who takes the career very seriously and the quality of his work is always guaranteed.I think he becomes a successful singer not only just because he is handsome,but more importantly,he is a person who truly loves music and put heart in it.He writes songs for himself,the song often reflecting his emotions,each song is genuine.There are some songs that are written for those who are hesitating and I felt it encouraged me at the time as well.His music often makes fans surprise.Like his newest album" heart beat” combining western music with classical Chinese instruments.

I think leehom set a good example that is do everything should put heart in and we should do our best in the work,

演讲稿来的,请帮忙改正下语法错误,让文章连贯点,最好再帮忙写个结尾,好的会追加悬赏的!

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Hello everyone, it is my great pleasure to share my speech with you today .my speech is about my favorite singer.—wangleehom

I think everyone here like music, do you have favorite singer? Let me i...

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