...你作为慈溪的一名高中学生，到慈溪的时代电影院看...

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Dear Manager,
I am a high school student in Cixi. Yesterday, I went to your cinema to see a film. The film was very good, but I did not enjoy it because there were some problems in the cinema。
First ，the prices of the tickets are really too high for us students to afford 。second ，the film was delayed as there so many advertisement at the beginning。It was rather annoying。Third ，the sound of the film was so loud that I could hardly hear it 。what’s more ，the EXIT signs could not be seen clearly ，which presented potential safety hazards 。if something terrible should happen，it would be difficult for people to get out quickly。
As a student in our city，I am very disappointed with my experience in your cinema。I am writing the letter in the hope that you can consider these problems and make improvements。
Yours faithfully，
Li Hua

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