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问题1：求助英文推荐信的查错和修改意见“Dear Admissions Committee:In capacity as president of Journalism and Communication college at ***University,I am pleased to have this opportunity to recommend one of my capable students,Mr.Chen,to you f[英语科目]

差不多了

问题2：英语翻译我给你发过去 就今晚上弄完就采纳就300个单词 有没有搞错 没人来？[数学科目]

你是用翻译软件翻的?那会乱七八糟.

如果是你自己写的,我可以帮你改.

问题3：帮我修改一下这篇英文推荐信I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx,an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology,to the master program of Economics at your university.Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abil[英语科目]

I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.

During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting (acceptance改为accepting) new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and (won the scholarship every year本句是按你的要求插进去的). In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.(She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school 本句是按你的要求插进去的) Due to her excellent performance, Miss x was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.

x is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. (She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.本句是按你的要求插进去的)

Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.

For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.

修改并整理后的全文如下：

I am very pleased to recommend Miss xx, an excellent graduate from xx Institute of Technology, to the master program of Economics at your university. Such an outstanding person as her in terms of character and abilities is indeed worthy of this opportunity to develop her potential and contribute to your school. I am sure that she will be a promising student who will greatly benefit from the future study at your esteemed university.

During my many years as a Professor I have come into contact with countless students. While some students stand out in the time that I teach them, only few make a lasting impression. Being one of my most gifted students, x is someone who has made such as impression. In spite of the fact that it has been only four years since I have had her as student, her delightful personality and ability of organization and leadership gave me deep impression. x showed her quick ability of accepting new knowledge. In class, she was always the most active one who often discussed with other students about academic issues in order to make progress for each other.Besides, thanks to her earnest and strict attitude to study, x was always top10 in class and won the scholarship every year. In addition, she demonstrated her strong organizational skill in various campus activities. For example, she organized students to visit Ministry of Foreign Affairs.She won the third prize in the Virtual Stocking Contest held by the school.Due to her excellent performance, Miss X was highly praised by the teachers as well as students.

X is really an extraordinary student with great intelligence and strong ability of organization. She worked at Student Union for years and was deeply loved by the teachers and the students.

Meanwhile,Miss X is in good health.She loves sports, playing volleyball very well.

For the reasons mentioned above,I dearly hope that you will consider her application favorable. In case you need any future information about her, please feel free to contact me.

问题4：Dear sir or madam,I would like to introduce you a brilliant student specializing in Advertising of our university—** University,in China.Qian has always been outstanding and positive in her studies and life,and this bright star of ours would be sur[英语科目]

说实话,这篇推荐信的质量不高啊.结构跟内容都有问题,这个很难改.我只能把语法跟词汇改了,内容还要lz自己斟酌~

Qian has always been outstanding 改为 Qian is always outstand

一般时更好,表示一如既往.

And I'm sure this bright star of ours would to be more extraordinary in the future.

原文用词重复,句子结构缀余.建议去掉of ours,或改为of our school

She was rewarded the University Scholarship for strong overall academic achievements when she was a freshman

奖学金这样表达更好~

she was selected as an exchange student to study in Central Connecticut State University when she was in her third year

时态错误,还有第三年的表达~

Qian worked hard and got almost A in her final examnation.

satisfied performance 改为 satisfactory performance

especially（后面不加逗号）her voluntary teaching in a Hope Primary School once a week for two years

They all like her and like to be her friends.

And often,when her classmates had any troubles,she always came to help them.改为She is often willing to help when classmates has any trouble.

最后一段末尾加一句：I'm glad to hear from you.